Ulva Khairani
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Writing II
My Experience in
Writing 1
Last semester, we studied with two different lecturers;
they are Mr. Saunir and Mrs.Witri. However, Mrs. Witri was no longer taught us,
because she had to leave related to her pregnancy. Mrs. Witri
then was replaced by Mr. Al Hafiz. When studied writing I, I found differences of
teaching style of Mr. Saunir, Mrs. Witri, and Mr. Hafiz.
Mr. Saunir concerns with our grammar. He ordered us to
create our own paragraph or essay based on what we have learned. After we made
it, our writing was shown to others through infocus. Our friends will give
comments, critical, or opinion to our writing, then it up to us whether we will
accept it or not.
Different with Mr. Saunir, Mr. Hafiz concerns to how to
build a good writing (essay or paragraph). After he gave explanation, then he
will order us to create our own essay. However, he sometimes did not ask us to
submit it or show to others.
On the other hand, Mrs. Witri also has a different
teaching style from those two male lecturers. She explained the materials to
us, step by step about each topic; then she ordered us to make our own
paragraph or essay. We then submit it, so that Mrs. Witri will give score to
our writing.
Frankly speaking, from those three lecturers, I like
Mrs. Witri’s teaching style. I like when our lecturers give explanation, let us
to create our own writing based on our ideas and imagination, and then we
submit it. It will help me especially to find out the increasing or decreasing
my ability in writing. I also can find out how is my score in each assignment.
My Hope in Writing
2
I hope this
semester will be better than the last semester in many things. First of all, I
really hope that my final grade will be A, because last semester I did not get
A. Then I hope that our lecturers can explain about the matery
very clearly. I also hope that this semester I will develop my ability in writing, so
that I can be a good writer in the future, because my desire is to be a
novelist. My hope is the lecturers will help me slowly, patiently, and
effectively.
be careful with tense.. in paragraph 1 " they are Mr. Saunir and Mrs.Witri". you should write "they were".
BalasHapusto make it better,you should develop your essay.
cemnguudh ulva :)
nice experience ulva,,, :) ,but you should develop your essay. keep writing !
BalasHapusThank's for your comments, guys.. ^_^
BalasHapusyou should develop this essay.
BalasHapusI agree with esi..
BalasHapus